Aajkal neend bahut aati hai..
Shaayad kisi ka khwaab dikhaa jaati hai..
Par ab us khwaab mein nahin kho raha hun main..
Ab kuch to badal raha hun main...
Abhi bhi oos gali se nikalta hun..
Shaayad kuch chaah judi hai usse..
Par ab us chaahat mein nahi kho raha hun main..
Ab kuch to badal raha hun main...
Ab teri yaad to aa hi jaati hai...
Kabhi mujhe bhi besudh kar jaati hai..
Par ab besudhi mein bhi jaagkar,so raha hun main..
Ab kuch to badal raha hun main..
Kabhi khushi bhi darwaaza khatkati hai...
Teri kami bhi usmein khoob sunaati hai..
Par ab us kami mein has kar ro raha hun main..
Ab kuch to badal raha hun main...
Kabhi dukh bhi aa hi jaata hai..
Aur kuch lamhe rosh ke suna hi jaata hai..
Par ab tere kaandhein par,rone ke lamhein kho raha hun main...
Ab kuch to badal raha hun main...
Kabhi tumhein bhi neend bahot aaye..
Aur koi gali ki raah machal jaaye..
Ya koi yaad aakar tumhein rula jaaye...
To tum bhi chali aana..
Aur aakar kuch badal jaana...
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10 comments:
Excellent One..!! Well thought & described Rohit.. :)
Thanks a lot...Positive feedback motivates me to write more...
Superlyyykkkkk.....!!!!
Was waiting fr ur post.. finally my wait is fruitful... so back wid a bang! :D very beautiful :)
was waitin fr ur post... fnally my wait is fruitful... so back wid a bang! :D excellent one... rily beautiful :)
Seems like you both copied.. :P Well thanks a lot.. :)
ahaan nthn as sch bth cmmnts are made by me it ws sme page error wich is shwng that name :P
nycooo!!! poem waiting for your boook eagerlyyy!!!!!!!!!! :)
and doo keeep on posting some of your storiess cause they tooo used to be very nyc nd i miss them :) allll the best :)
Thanks a lot Divyanshi!! I am trying for a lot of time to get some time to continue the story that I had been writing..Will do so as early I can..!! :)
लिखा तो अच्छा है यार , लेकिन हिंदी की कविताये रोमन में न लिखी जाएँ तो अच्छा है , और टिप्पड़ियों का वेरिफिकेशन भी अच्छा नहीं माना जाता , एडमिन पैनल में ये सुविधा होती है की बाद में आप उसे डिलीट कर दें ...
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